Friday, May 24, 2013

My Writing: Celestial Sea {Poem}



Celestial Sea

explosive, the stars grow old and burst,
they race through space and collide headfirst.
bright constellations, like veins, appear
the cosmos are all connected, a sphere.
a nebula manifests like an alien world
in shapes so strange they expand and unfurled.
colors strikingly vivid paint the night sky;
shades of sapphire, honey, and moss appeal to the naked eye.
a stretch of infinite space starts to collapse
into a black hole that’ll consume anything in its grasp.
amidst this celestial sea, we stand alone
on a tiny little planet, a pebble, we call home.
the show felt like a spectacular state of delirium
and everyone was heartbroken to leave the planetarium.

What do you think?

Have a great weekend!
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23 comments:

  1. you are really gifted, Sara!

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  2. Wow, dear Sara, you are talented <3

    xx from Bavaria, Rena

    www.dressedwithsoul.blogspot.de

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  3. so true, we are not a big as we think we are.

    Delightful Ideas

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  4. wow i love this, especially the "twist" at the end!

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  5. Your a very talented writer, Sara. Its the kind of poetry that gives beautiful images and not all poetry can do that! Thank you for sharing your poetry with us! x

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  6. Yet another great work. Love to see more of your work Sara :D

    West Virgineth of TO THE WEST
    http://westbriones.blogspot.com/

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  7. Great post. I was totally amazed on it.

    become an author

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~Sara ♥

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